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Review: NCISLA “Where Loyalties Lie” (S13E10)

Hey everyone! I hope that you all are healthy and hopefully getting back to normal now that the pandemic seems to be fading out… finally. I’ve been out of the loop for the last few months and have not been keeping up with the show like I usually do. So, it was with some trepidation that I agreed to write the review for “Where Loyalties Lie” but, I am glad to say that I did actually enjoy this episode.

Written by Matt Klafter and directed by Tawnia McKiernan, the episode revealed that a civilian scientist working for the military is murdered and an advanced radar system is stolen. The regular crew (minus Roundtree and, of course, Hetty) was joined by a guest cast consisting of Anthony Alabi (Marine Master Sgt. David Maxwell), J. Anthony Pena (Manny Ortiz), Jessica A. Caesar (Ruby), James Martin Kelly (Seth Wilcox), Ann Hu (Jun Chen), Kristin Carey (Dr. Laura Nash), Bridger Buckley (Hunt), and Tom Virtue (Dr. Hodge).

Let’s dispense with the particulars of the case right away so we can get to the more tangible parts of the episode. The case was pretty straightforward; we had the opening with some Marines, led by Master Sgt. Maxwell, moving through a close quarters simulator with some type of high-tech goggles that could actually “see” through walls while identifying if the combatants were armed. After two of them are taken out, we see that while the goggles give a great advantage to whomever is wearing them, they are not exactly as accurate as they are designed to be.

Enter Dr. Laura Nash, who tells the Master Sergeant (referred to as “Top” by us Leathernecks) and his Marines that they need to run through it again to work out some of the kinks in the system. Then we see the sun set and the good doctor is working alone when she hears something that takes her away from her workstation. Upon finding a dead rat in a trap, she thinks the danger is past when she is suddenly shot down by a gunman in the shadows. 

Then we get the details of the case provided by Fatima back in Operations: the doctor is dead, and the high-tech goggles are missing, which is potentially a game changer if they fall into the wrong hands. The team begins to investigate all the parties involved, from the Marines to the doctor’s associates and her right-hand-man who becomes the standout suspect fairly quickly. When he can’t be located, their attention falls on Jun Chen, a visiting doctor from Shanghai who turns out to be a spy for the People’s Republic of China. Under Sam and Callen’s interrogation, she reveals who she bought the goggles from but will not reveal the location of the goggles. 

By the end of the episode, the team finds itself with only half of the case solved. The doctor’s killer has been discovered and had been groomed by the leader of the White Kings, a white supremacist group who had also acquired a supply of a new and dangerous explosive that was impossible to detect and very volatile. He stole the tech to sell to the Chinese spy for a couple of million dollars and was planning on using the money to escape after planting the explosives at a community center and targeting a scholarship awards program for immigrant families. Even after thwarting the attack and taking out both of the perpetrators, the team had still not acquired the missing goggles. 

There were no real surprises revealed as the find-the-clues-solve-the-case formula played out. The only real suspect was Doctor Nash’s assistant and then his history was uncovered by Fatima fairly easily. Then all the team had to do was establish the target and that was fleshed out by Kensi’s unfathomable obsession with denim. Sam and Callen took out the two bad guys easily while Kensi and Deeks were ensuring the safe evacuation of the community center. Only a few shots fired, and the end result was two dead guys and some work for the bomb squad to clean up. 

I feel like we’re still waiting for a true protagonist for our team to fight against. I mean, the two terrorists in this show went through a lot of trouble to stage their attack, but then they had no back up plan if they ran into problems. Where are the bad guys that are two steps ahead of the team? Where was the dead man’s switch that activated as soon as the perpetrator was shot? Why not have it on a timer or motion activated if anyone tried to leave the building? It was a simple plan, but it felt pretty generic as well. I think we need to see the team put up against bad guys that really give them a run for their money and with some serious collateral damage. I’m not asking for a high body count, but the stakes need to be higher if the threat is going to feel “real”.

What bothered me about the resolution was fairly obvious: there really wasn’t one. The high-tech goggles were still out there and from Kilbride’s reaction that even though a shooter with a pair of these would bad, an army wearing them would be catastrophic. Yet, the team closes it up, relaxes and heads home. Uhhh… no… the game isn’t over, and the full court press should still be on. Did they leave this for the second shift? Did they call Washington? Is the phone ringing in the Bat Cave? I’m sorry, but when the threat is still active, you don’t just go home without a plan, and I feel that part was left out.

No real big chases or explosions. So, for me, the case gets a basic “meh” as far as excitement goes. It had enough to keep my attention but nothing to really write home about. But what did keep my attention and why I still like this show was the interactions between the characters. From the opening with Kensi and Deeks’ bantering about converting the two-car garage into a man-cave, to Kilbride easing Fatima’s tension by asking about the game from the night before, to Callen keeping Sam in the dark about how the secret agent is getting ghosted. 

I love watching Dani and Eric ad lib through their scenes. Her smack to his behind when she ran past to when she almost spit out her drink when he mentioned “artisan cows raised on artisan grass” and then they shift to talking about consulting a magic eight ball. Then we got a Wild Ones reference complete with Deeks in a leather jacket and a Marlon Brando impersonation. That actually cracked me up!

These two are so comfortable acting together that they never seem to be acting together. I think that they have been friends and relatives for so long, that even though their characters are married in the show, they sometimes come across as true brother and sister. This isn’t a bad thing, and it really adds to their dynamic, but sometimes I think it takes away from the intimacy that we expect from a happily married couple. It’s great for their interactions and banter, but any outside observer who only sees what we see might mistake them for siblings instead of husband and wife. 

But the part of the episode that stood out the most to me was Deeks and his concern over having to tell Callen that they were selling the Squid and Dagger and that Callen was going to have to find a new place to live. While this seemed like an easy thing to do, you could really see how Deeks was struggling to do this to his friend and teammate. He tried to hide it with humor with Kensi, then he became nervous and frantic while trying to talk Sam into doing it for him. 

Eventually, at the very end, Deeks slunk into the bullpen and finally broke it to his friend, and we got one of the sweetest moments that I can remember between these two characters. Here was Deeks, worried sick over having to tell his trusted teammate that he was about to be put out of his place and the team leader reveals that he had moved in in order to help out the younger couple financially. It was one of those “Gift of the Magi” moments… it’s a classic, look it up… that shows that even when the writers don’t give a very intriguing case, they can still fill these characters with heart and soul.

We also got a tender moment when Deeks and Kensi were interviewing the high-end store owner, Ruby and she revealed the tragic story about her connection with the local charity that was the target of the attack. Her sad tale of her sister’s addiction to meth and subsequent relapse that claimed her life really brought out the feels for me. I’ve worked with people struggling with the same addiction and it is a terrible situation that too many of us are familiar with. I thought that both Dani and Eric’s facial expressions perfectly conveyed their compassion for the young woman and the loss she had experienced. 

But… and this is a big but… I cannot believe that we had no x-ray glasses references, not one! I have a stack of old comic books and on the back cover of almost every one is an advertisement where you can send off for a pair of x-ray specs that would allow you to see through… well… anything! And not one time did we get Deeks saying anything about using them to see what Kensi is wearing underneath her clothes. No comparisons to Superman or questions about being able to see through lead. I thought that was a terrible waste of material and really took something away that I feel Eric would have really had some fun with. There would have been plenty of opportunities for Lois and Clarke references or finding the remote that they lost a month ago or seeing what Sam ate for lunch. Oh well, I guess that’s why I don’t get to write the show. 

Once the case was resolved, we got the real reason for the episode: another layer of the onion that further reveals that Callen is being ghosted by some mysterious figure (or figures). They have even gone as far as to impersonate him to his doctor and apparently his bank as well. They must be testing out their deepfake work as well as Callen’s level of security which seems weak if they know his doctor and bank. Since we are heading toward the down slope of the end of the season in May, this might just be the tease that gets us to the finale. I guess we will have to wait and see. What I got from this show was that someone has it out for Callen, it will involve Anna, and it could possibly have huge implications for the Office of Special Projects. Is Katya about to pop back up and cause even more death and mayhem?

So, what do you think about this episode? Was it riveting or did it leave you wanting? What did you like about it and what did you dislike? How do you feel about the White Supremacists in the military/government story line? Do you have any theories about who is out to get Callen? How will Deeks and Kensi resolve the Man Cave Conundrum? We didn’t get much on the “kids” issue, so where do you think that is going? And, where in the world is Hetty?

Drop us a comment and don’t forget to come back later this week for Deeks’ Surf Log and Kensi’s journal. And as always, SEMPER FI!

About Jericho Steele (32 Articles)
I'm just me. I served proudly in the United States Marine Corps for four years after graduating from high school. For the past twenty-six years, I've been married to the most wonderful woman in the world. Our daughter is still at home but our son just moved to Russia to study at Moscow State University. We also live with four cats and one dog in south Georgia where I spend my time loving my family, writing stories, working, and shooting my bow.

9 Comments on Review: NCISLA “Where Loyalties Lie” (S13E10)

  1. Betty Dawn Martinez // March 8, 2022 at 12:59 PM // Reply

    Great review! You described my feelings about the epidode perfectly. I loved the character interactions, but the case itself was meh. No real tension or fear. That is okay at this point, at least as long as it doesn’t happen too often. One thing you didn’t mention is that In the early days (seasons 1 – 4), tension was created because Deeks was often mistreated by the team. It made for good storytelling, but I am glad it is gone.

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  2. Great review. I really appreciate you taking the time and effort to put it together. What you wrote matches much of how I feel about the episode and the show. Something you didn’t bring up –the early episodes (seasons 1-5), had a lot more tension and fear, partly because Deeks was the outsider and the Densi relationship was still developing. Now, I want to see the core group happy and supportive of one another. The idea of family is often misused on television; people who work together are co-workers, not friends, at least not usually. This group, however, has that family vibe. At this point, I tune in more for that than the cases.

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  3. Didn’t mean to comment twice. I thought this one was lost because I had trouble posting.


  4. Great review, Randy, for what I thought was a so-so episode. I agree with everything you wrote, especially about missing the banter Eric Beale would have had with Deeks about x-ray glasses. Maybe you should be writing a few episodes. Unfortunately, there is no one left in Ops with a sense of humor. My main quibble with the case was who the traitor was revealed to be. How does someone get a high security clearance without a deep dive into his background? If Fatima could find that information, then why not whoever vetted him? I found it a very glaring weak point to the story.

    I must say, I thought ECO spun his banter out a bit too fast for me. He seemed revved up like the energizer bunny. But, I love Deeks and it was the only storyline I cared about. I loved that scene with Deeks and Callen. It was sweet, and that’s something we don’t get to see too much of from Callen. Nice to see that character written as caring and less aloof. Those two together made the whole episode. Thanks, Marine.

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  5. Thanks Randy for this great review! I agree that the case itself was run of the mill, and I appreciate your desire to see them run up against more cunning bad guys. Iʻd just like to have bad guys who get a few lines of dialog. I feel like the show has too frequently led the team on a chase to find the bad guys, but we donʻt spend enough time with them to really fear or hate them. Katya is a perfect example. How many years ago did she actually have screen time?

    Still, I adored all the Densi scenes. There was something about the energetic way they delivered the lines, and how happy and relaxed they both seemed, that took me back to the classic early days of Densi banter. I was also really touched by Deeksʻ scene with Callen at the end. Itʻs my favorite scene ever between these two, and it showed how close they have become, something the show has rarely shown us because these two get so few scenes one-on-one like this one.


  6. Thank you for your great review you really said it all, I agree with previous comments that you, Lindy D., and Karen P should & need to take over the show and write great stories.
    Actually, I enjoyed this episode so much that I’ve watched it 3 times already. To be honest it was the only episode that I enjoyed fully this season it has it all. it was a well-balanced EP whether with the character’s interactions, the humor, and the seriousness.
    I loved Densi scenes it was like a throwback to the old days (yes this is the Desni I fell in love for), I loved Deeks & Sam’s conversation it felt natural and not forced. but what was outstanding was the scene between Callen & Deeks maybe (at least for me) it was the first time that I felt they have a bond. But wasn’t Deeks offer to Callen in S10 that he will live for free ???
    I was worried about Callen at first that he could have some kind of injury or disease but the last scene explained it all & loved that they will carry on & continue the story from the last year (Imposter Syndrome).
    My only complaint is they need Fatima to quit whining about her job whether she is in the field or in OPS.
    Great EP & looking forward to the upcoming stories.


  7. Debra Gillespie // March 9, 2022 at 12:49 AM // Reply

    Glad to see you doing a review, Jericho…you definitely got back into the reviewing saddle with ease. I pretty much agree with other posters about the rather so-so case, and loving the banter with the core characters, especially the Densi ones and the final Callen-Deeks scene. I too remember in early season 10 Deeks offering the apt. above the bar rent-free, but gave leeway to the notion that perhaps when profits went south during the pandemic, that Callen offered to pay rent and Deeks/Kensi accepted. What really confused me was that Callen lived twice as long in that house that Hetty offered in seasons 2-9, compared to the apartment above the Squid and Dagger, and as far as I know that was a continuation error. Just makes me wonder that because of the pandemic that there are fewer people BTS to research things like this for accuracy.
    In last season’s Imposter Syndrome the team came to suspect that Katya was behind using the deep fake technology, and it looks like that storyline is going to picked up again. I hope that’s what’s going to happen, and we’ll finally get a resolution concerning Katya/Callen/Anna.


  8. Ivelina Plamena Georgievi // March 9, 2022 at 4:38 AM // Reply

    Fans need Densi kisses!!!!!!!


  9. Good review, Marine.
    In the ep. we could’ve had one line from the suspect even if it was a cliché, ‘You’ll never take me alive, Copper!’
    I generally agree with everything else posted. Great minds (and fans) think alike.
    In the UK, we have a programme called ‘Click’ that provides innovations in tech. Deepfake-type technology has been around for a while, and illustrated on the show firstly by using a presenter as an example of what might be achieved. And then by examples of fake news speeches allegedly made by national leaders. I am a Luddite who finds the possible implications of such technology scary and in the realm of science fiction rather than science fact.


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